http://www.flickr.com/photos/ccmonty/258321764/in/set-72157594308719700/ Self portraits are damned tough. You need a bounce flash. Nasty highlights on your forehead, nose, lip and chin. Really nasty shadow on the wall. The shadow on the wall could be alleviated by hitting the wall with a light. I'd crop a bit more off the top and right side, putting you closer to 1:30.
Other than the glare spots, the exposure and color balance are good. It also looks like it would work better with a longer lens from further back. As I said, self portraits are tough.
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Date: 2006-10-17 06:48 am (UTC)Self portraits are damned tough.
You need a bounce flash. Nasty highlights on your forehead, nose, lip and chin. Really nasty shadow on the wall. The shadow on the wall could be alleviated by hitting the wall with a light. I'd crop a bit more off the top and right side, putting you closer to 1:30.
Other than the glare spots, the exposure and color balance are good. It also looks like it would work better with a longer lens from further back. As I said, self portraits are tough.